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Thor Revisited by =Cthulhu-Calls:iconCthulhu-Calls:

Categories Cartoons & Comics > Traditional Media > Comics > Misc

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Well, as promised, here is the actual scan of the Thor piece I did. I colored it in gray scale and then edited the caption boxes in Photo shop with Jin's help. this is also one of my first attempts at inking, Let me here your thoughts.

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*SpartanWilco Jul 18, 2009, 5:50:06 AM
this was always an epic piece. this new version just builds on it.
there are a few thing though that hold it back though.
the layout. if panel 4 didnt exist and the text in it were at the bottom of panel 3 it would be fine, but, since it does exist it feels like it should be panel 2 and just move the other ones down. leaving the text box in their original positions.
panels two and three are my favorite and accenting the blood really lets it pop out at the reader. over all its a great piece especially for a first attempt.
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*SpartanWilco Jul 18, 2009, 4:33:10 AM
this is some great work man!

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Vegetables are alot like buttsecks...If you're forced to have it as a kid, you're not gonna like it as an adult.

Girls are alot like squaring numbers...if they're under 13 just do them in your head.
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=Cthulhu-Calls Jul 18, 2009, 4:43:14 AM
thanks, I slip on the cape in panel one but over all I am still pleased with it.

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"That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with stranger aeons, even death may die." H.P. Lovecraft
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*SpartanWilco Jul 18, 2009, 5:24:33 AM
its nicely done im horrible with storytelling though so im no judge

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Vegetables are alot like buttsecks...If you're forced to have it as a kid, you're not gonna like it as an adult.

Girls are alot like squaring numbers...if they're under 13 just do them in your head.
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=Cthulhu-Calls Jul 18, 2009, 5:28:25 AM
but you are a critique and your opinion matters.

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"That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with stranger aeons, even death may die." H.P. Lovecraft
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*SpartanWilco Jul 18, 2009, 5:32:24 AM
very well...

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Vegetables are alot like buttsecks...If you're forced to have it as a kid, you're not gonna like it as an adult.

Girls are alot like squaring numbers...if they're under 13 just do them in your head.
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~desert-shield Jul 18, 2009, 9:33:57 AM
Definitely a piece long-time comin' for the DA page dude. Glad to see those Copic pens worked out for ya!

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"Shephard Book used to tell me if you can't do something smart, do something right."

~Jayne Cobb, Serenity
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